
16 July | August 2022 AJL News and Reviews
REVIEWS OF TITLES FOR CHILDREN AND TEENS
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REVIEWS OF TITLES FOR CHILDREN AND TEENS
Colman, Dani, e Unnished Corner. Illustrated by Rachel
“Tuna” Petrovicz. Missoula, MT: Wonderbound Comics, 2022.
222 pp. $12.99 (9781638490111) PBK. Gr. 5-9.
Miriam “Miri” Feigenbaum wakes up
on her birthday, the day she becomes
a Bat Mitzvah, to nd out that she
got into the art school that she applied to
— the art school that she hasn’t told her
friends about. When she gets to her seem-
ingly very pluralistic school, she meets up
with her friends David and Avi, and their
classmate Judith to go on an outreach trip
to Washington, DC. Accompanied by the
black-hatted, white-bearded Rabbi Adam
Yehudi, the kids set o on their trip only to nd out quickly that
their minivan is ying and they’re not headed in the direction of
DC at all.
Rabbi Yehudi reveals himself to actually be an angel, one who
instructs Miri that she needs to nish the “Unnished Corner,” that
small portion that G-d le undone during creation where all the evil
and demons live. Aer some convincing, Miriam and her friends agree
that they’re going to nish the universe and set o on adventures
to accomplish that which includes trekking through the Desert of
Zin where they encounter the “Lost Generation of the Wilderness,”
Miriam from the Torah, angels, Nephilim, the Golem, and Lilith. Can
Miri nish the universe with the help of her friends? What will happen
when they nd out she applied to a dierent school?
Weaving a myriad of Jewish mythology and folklore together
to create an epic adventure, e Unnished Corner will be enjoy-
able for readers. Minor quibbles with text and artwork, such as
people saying yashar koach instead of mazel tov where it would be
expected, and the word emet being written in the wrong direction
in Hebrew are going to distract only the most eagle-eyed readers.
Overall, as the genre of Jewish graphic novels is lagging behind its
secular counterparts, even if slightly awed, e Unnished Corner
is a welcome addition to the eld.
Rebecca Levitan,
Co-editor, Children’s and Teen Literature, AJL News and Reviews
AJL SSCPL Division President
Librarian III, Baltimore County Public Library,
Pikesville Branch
Feldman, Jacquetta Nammar. Wishing Upon the Same Stars.
New York, NY: HarperCollins, 2022. 363 pp. $16.99
(9780063034389) HC. Gr. 5-8.
M
oving to a new home can be a dicult rite of passage for a
seventh-grade girl, especially one of Arab descent. When
Yasmeen Khouri’s Palestinian-Lebanese family moves from
Detroit, with its large Arab community, to San Antonio, Texas,
Yasmeen wants nothing more than to t in. Of all the girls she meets,
it is Ayelet Cohen, a Jewish girl who shares her
sense of being “dierent at school,” with whom
Yasmeen bonds most readily.
But there’s a problem. Yasmeen’s grand-
mother’s Jerusalem home was demolished by
the Israelis. Ayelet’s father grew up in Israel,
so Yasmeen feels compelled to conceal from
her anti-Israeli father the inconvenient fact
that Mr. Cohen is her aer-school Math Lab
coach. e tensions between the families are resolved at the end,
when the Cohen family helps the Khouris rescue Yasmeen’s grand-
mother’s garden in San Antonio from a ash ood.
Wishing Upon the Same Stars presents the two friends as agents of
this reconciliation, but the price of the families’ friendship is to dis-
tance the Cohens as much as possible from Israel. When Yasmeen’s
father accuses Mr. Cohen of being “an Israeli [who] thinks demol-
ishing people’s homes is all right?” Yasmeen protests, “But Baba, Mr.
Cohe … isn’t like those people … His daughter, Ayelet, says her dad’s
family moved to Israel when he was in high school, but he wanted
to raise his kids here in Texas. He’s American, to … just like us.”
So a good Israeli is one who isn’t like “those people,” and who
doesn’t want to live there.
Feldman is also not averse to allowing Mr. Khouri’s accusation
that Israel is practicing “apartheid” to rest unchallenged by any
other character in her novel.
As for home demolitions, Feldman never explains why the grand-
mother’s home was demolished. Home demolitions in Israel aren’t arbi
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trary; they must follow strict legal procedures. Homes are demolished
because they are built illegally, or to prevent future terrorist attacks.
Feldman reads Israeli history backwards, crediting the Holocaust for
Israel’s creation and, shockingly, contriving a fanciful parallel between
the Arabs’ “nakba” (“catastrophe”) and the Holocaust: “e Holocaust
and the creation of Israe … . led to our Nakba,” states Yasmeen. In fact,
by the time eodore Herzl convened the rst Zionist Congress in
Basel in 1897, the Zionist project was already underway. And the
“nakba” meant mass displacement; the Holocaust meant mass murder.
It’s only Israel’s enemies who fail to see the dierence.
Marjorie Gann,
Program Chair of AJL-Canada
Young peoples’ book reviewer, Committee for Accuracy in Middle
East Reporting and Analysis
Frazier, Sundee T. Mighty Inside. Hoboken, NJ: Levine uerido,
2021. 240 pp. $17.99 (9781646140916) HC. Gr. 3-6.
Set in 1955 Spokane, Washington, Melvin Johnson is a high
school freshman, one of the few black students in his pre-
dominantly white public school. Melvin Johnson is also a
stutterer, relentlessly teased and bullied, and spends his days trying
not to open his mouth. Melvin’s friend, Lenny, is a fast-talking,