2B. Eliminate possible misunderstandings or problems: Mark 1:41, 44,
45; 2:1-2, 13, 15, 16, 18, 23; 4:10, 11; 6:32, 44, 45, 49-50; 8:34;
13:14, 23, 29
3. Author's style, typical style or vocabulary: Mark 1:40(3x), 42; 2:3-4(2x),
5, 6, 12, 15, 24; 4:5, 6, 10, 11, 15, 17; 6:33(2x), 34, 35,36,39-
40,41,46(2x),50;8:15, 17-18, 27, 31, 34, 35, 38; 9:2, 4, 7; 12:6, 13, 15,
22, 24; 13:5, 8, 22, 23, 27, 30, 31, 32 3A. Change arbitrary style into
unified style: Mark 2:6; 4:9, 18, 20; 6:45; 8:16, 20; 12:7; 13:20
4. Less refined expressions
4A. Less refined grammatical form: Mark 1:40, 41; 2:1-2, 26; 4:4(2x),
8,16, 17, 20; 6:29, 36; 8:27, 35, 36(2x); 9:7; 13:24, 25
4B. Less refined lexical expression: Mark 2:11, 22(2x); 4:6; 6:33, 46;
8:30, 31; 9:4, 5, 8, 9; 12:15, 16, 18, 19; 13:3, 16
4C. Grammatical improvements: Mark 8:28; 9:9; 13:14, 27
5. Smoother texts are later readings
5A. Make the text clearer: Mark 1:41; 2:8, 9, 16, 18, 19, 21, 22, 23, 24;
4:1, 10, 11, 12, 15; 6:17, 37-38, 39-40, 43, 44, 47-48, 49, 55; 8:14,
16, 21, 27(2x), 30, 31(2x); 9:7; 12:2, 3, 7, 9, 10, 12, 13, 17, 18, 23;
13:4, 5, 22, 27, 32
5B. Adding explicit subject/object: Mark 2:14, 16, 24(2x); 6:27, 37-38,
49, 50, 54; 8:14, 15, 17-18; 9:9; 12:3, 9, 14; 13:6, 18
5C. Make the text smoother: Mark 1:44; 2:10; 6:29, 47-48; 8:37; 12:1,
11, 14, 17(2x); 13:6(2x), 7
5D. Eliminate redundancy: Mark 1:40(3x), 41,42,44; 2:7(2x), 9, 11, 15,
16, 18, 19, 20, 25, 26(2x); 4:1, 2, 3, 7, 8; 6:17, 18, 22-23(2x), 24-25,
27, 28, 29, 36, 37-38, 49, 50, 53, 54, 56; 8:19, 27, 28; 9:1, 2, 3;
12:7, 14, 19, 21, 23(2x), 27; 13:6, 15, 16, 19, 20, 21, 24, 27, 28