
behind it just as important and just as nervously anxious to do
something effective in the way of swamping boats (Crane,
2009:14).
Here Crane mentions the main disadvantage of the sea in general to make clear that
Cook, Oiler, Correspondent and Captain from the beginning of the story to the end are at the
mercy of sea changes, which let the four men hopeless throughout the story.
4.3 Crane’s Descriptive writing on Naturalism in The Open Boat
Crane writes very descriptively to convey vivid mental images in reader’s mind about
people, places and things to give better understanding for the story; this is clear in the
following examples:
The cook squatted in the bottom and looked with both eyes at the six
inches of gunwale, which separated him from the ocean. His sleeves
were rolled over his fat forearms, and the two flaps of his unbuttoned
vest dangled as he bent to bail out the boat (Crane, 2009:11-12).
In this example, Crane describes the state of the Cook when he bent to bail out the boat
he gives us an image about his sleeves, vest, eyes, forearms and the boat. Therefore, through
this vivid image Crane helps us to understand the state of the Cook.
Crane also describes Oiler’s state, when he said:
The Oiler, steering with one of the two oars in the boat, sometimes
raised himself to keep clear of water that swirled in over the stern. It
was a thin little oar and it seems often ready to snap (Crane,
2009:12).
From this description we notice that Crane uses adjectives like thin, little to give us
an image about how the oar was, also he shows us how the Oiler was careful, in that he
sometimes raised himself to have a look to the water over the stern (Crane, 2009).
In addition to that, Crane’s description of things has vivid images, this clear when he
described the seat in the boat, he said:
A seat in this boat was not unlike a seat upon a bucking
broncho, and, by the same token, a broncho is not much smaller
(Crane, 2009:13).